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I'd put money on it being kidray76.
The play we were working on closed yesterday, and we struck the set today.
It was fun.
I'm working on a play my school is producing, and I'm also taking the state-mandated driving course, all in the same week. Most of the time, I don't get home until after 9. Sleep deprivation just caught up with me today, and I'm having trouble focusing.
BUT I HAVE A TATTERED SHRED OF A LIFE, AND THAT'S MORE THAN MOST OF YOU CAN EVER DREAM OF DREAMING OF HAVING.
So I've got a really, really bad case of post-writing depression. It's what I always get after I write something. Then I write again to take my mind off it, and become happy whilst working on it, then write it and feel euphoric for a couple days, then crash back into depression, upon which I start looking for new ideas. I suspect there's a spiral in there somewhere.
So, I'm going to be an emo for a while. Also, if you haven't commented on my story yet, leave a comment. I'm dying of a lack of criticism here. Seriously, how do I improve if nobody tells me what my flaws are? Hmmmmmmmmm?
I'm also seriously considering getting an ASSTR domain.
Brittany's heart thumped rapidly as she stared into the depths of the alley. She suddenly felt cold, despite the expensive furs she was wearing. A pit of nervousness began to form in her stomach. Standing right where the alley began, she felt as if she was staring into a deep. dark canyon. From behind, she felt someone bump into her, sending her stumbling into the alley. She looked back, reflexively, but saw only the usual night crowd of people, blank faces with nowhere to go, nothing to do. A few of them stared at her, and one man stopped to ask her if she was nuts. She knew that walking into a back alley was a dangerous idea, especially if she was dressed like she was. But it was the danger that excited her. That was why she so often dressed with expensive furs and beautiful jewelry, like she was now.
Taking a deep breath, she slowly began walking down the alley. With every step, her anxiety increased. The diamond ring on her finger glinted from the streetlights behind her. Around her, the alley became darker and darker, doorways appearing like entrances into empty caverns, ordinary items like old boxes seeming sinister and menacing. However, beneath all her anxiety was a bubble of excitement, the thought of being assaulted, raped, and robbed. It excited her and made her willing to go into the most fearsome of alleys.
As she neared the end of the alley, she sensed a change in the light from the street. Her heart leapt into her throat as she turned around and saw a man in a long cloak standing behind her. He was tall, handsome, and obviously powerfully muscled, but very pale. Before she could do anything, in one swift movement, he rushed at her and clapped a rag over her face. She breathed in an impossibly sweet odor, and began feeling faint and dizzy. Within a few seconds, she was unconscious.
She gradually came to, watching her vision swim before her eyes for a few seconds before everything focused. It took her a few seconds to realize that she couldn't move her hands, and she saw why quickly. She was tied, spread-eagled and naked, to the posts of a four poster bed. The bed was a magnificent one, a mahogany antique that looked like it would belong in a European manor, rather than the shabby, dingy room it was in. Looking around, she saw the furs she had worn in were shredded, the clumps and pieces thrown everywhere. Her jewelry was scattered among the ruined furs in a similar manner, the necklace broken, the diamonds cracked. Most disturbing of all, she noticed her body was covered in scratches and bite marks. All this just boosted her excitement to a fever pitch, but she was still caught off guard when the man entered.
He was still wearing the cloak from earlier, which he cast off as he approached her. He was nude underneath it, and she saw what he looked like. He was powerfully muscled, but was still very pale, which unnerved her. However, by now, she was excited, and the fear was gone. He climbed up on the bed, and without any real sort of prelude, he entered her.
He was rough, and she found herself being buffered against the headboard as he thrust in and out of her. However, she was enjoying it too much to make any sort of protest. As he continued to rape her, she caught a glimpse of his teeth.
His teeth were beautifully white, and in excellent shape. However, it wasn't his orthodonture that had caught her eyes. It was the large fangs, two on the top and two on the bottom.
He was a vampire.
The very thought of this sent her over the edge, and she closed her eyes and wailed as the most powerful orgasm of her life swept through her. Small points of light danced across her eyelids, and she felt him reach his orgasm too. That only prolonged hers, and she was in pure ecstasy for over a minute.
As she came down off the short-lived high, she noticed him staring at her with blood-red eyes. Without warning, he opened his mouth wide and brought it down upon her neck, sinking his fangs in deep, piercing her arteries and drinking her blood.
The instant his fangs broke her skin, another orgasm swept through her, even bigger than the last one. The small points of light in her eyelids grew and merged together, forming pools of flashing multicolored lights. As he drained her blood, sucking the life out of her, she went into an orgasmic haze, wailing, then moaning, then whimpering as her life drained away, the orgasms forgotten in death.
The vampire released his hold on the girl's neck and sat up, watching the light of life leave her eyes.
Idea by Brittany (yes, the former ChaiLatte).
Writings by me.
EDIT: Brittany liked it. Also, time for some info on it.
I was experimenting with a much more elegant style in this one, rather than the graphic, dirty form I was using in the other ones. Turned out well, I think.
Also, TRY TO MAKE YOUR COMMENTS ON TOPIC. GOD.
Also, thanks to that ugetanF dumbass for advertising my story. :D :D :D
FYI: While I was writing this story, I had no idea this even existed. So yeah, I didn't "rip my idea of that moive".
Level 21 is shit.
Also, I made a new banner mocking everyone that steals that one.
I'll take my chances with the diseases over the needles.
Also, the S. Cap, or stay decapped?
Remember, your opinion doesn't matter, but I always love to see what the ignorant masses have to say.
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